Friday 23 October 2015

Sun Poem



This is a poem about the sun which I made that relates to our inquiry unit.

3 comments:

  1. To deandra, we liked the way you told us what you see and feel. You need to work on a little bit more information, but good work!!

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  2. You also could put a description

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  3. You also could put a description

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