Friday, 7 June 2013

My Narrative On The Magic Flying Carpet

The Magic Flying Carpet

Every picture tells a story.

Use your imagination and experience to narrate (tell) a story about the picture.

Where is the carpet going?
Travel all over the world

Because he thought that his home had no meaning for him to be there and because it was his dream

What problem is caused?
He misses home and aborts his once and a lifetime dream so he can go home

How is it solved?

By not by giving up but by sticking around in his home country where everything is a dream come to reality to him

Think about:

  • where your story is set
  • who your characters are - what they do, what they say, and how they think and feel
  • the problem and how it is solved
  • the order of your ideas and how they are linked.

Remember to:
  • choose your words carefully
  • take care with your spelling, punctuation, and sentences
  • edit-add or delete words or sentences to improve your work

In a land with dunes of sand a playful yet adventurous flying carpet by the name of Raj had dreams of exploring the world and see new things see anything except just dunes of sand. He felt that he would never escape from his sand dune prison that he was too bored to call his home, but he never gave up on his dream of exploring though he came across a strange looking place with water, trees and camels where he had realised he was at the Oasis.

There he met a shy but playful young camel named Boren  whose dreams were to explore the world as well but had no intention of leaving his home because he thought it was impossible and that there was no way he could travel the world on foot.

Although the magic flying carpet was determined to make his and the young camel’s dream become their reality Raj tried for hours to convince Boren to come and explore with him but then Boren hesitated and finally said that he couldn’t leave his home or his family but then the magic carpet understood  and said goodbye.

So off he went to explore and see what the rest of the world had to offer and he began his tour all over Africa, France,  America, China, Romania and Russia but after he toured almost the whole world he then grew tired of his adventuring he aborted his dream and knew that there was nowhere in the world better than his hot, sandy desert home in Egypt.

When Raj had returned home his young camel friend had not looked so young but was feeling well when Raj had returned home Boren had gave Raj a hug and said “Welcome Home old friend” and Raj said “ I know old friend i know.”

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