Friday, 14 August 2015

Night Market Safari:

This is a googe presentation that I have made to showcase my own recount about a past childhood memory relating

1 comment:

  1. Kapai Deandra. You have used vivid language features to describe and recount a past memory related to peaceful play. You definitely took me on a journey with this story of your family's night market food safari.

    How else do you think you could develop the key idea of peaceful play in your story? Continue to use the writing rubric to level up your writing skills Deandra - Keep writing these amazing stories.