This blog is a record of my learning from Tamaki Primary School through to Tamaki College.
Kapai Deandra. You have used vivid language features to describe and recount a past memory related to peaceful play. You definitely took me on a journey with this story of your family's night market food safari. How else do you think you could develop the key idea of peaceful play in your story? Continue to use the writing rubric to level up your writing skills Deandra - Keep writing these amazing stories.